Sitting in English class in middle school, looking over this
poem, it’s always intrigued me.
Something about it always made me want to read it over and over
again. At first glance, there’s the
obvious forest imagery, that always reminds me of my times camping, my time in
boy scouts, and the friends I’ve made there, or of the times I went hiking, and
times I came across my own two paths in the wood.
Two roads
diverged in a yellow wood,
And sorry I could
not travel both
And be one
traveler, long I stood
And looked down
one as far as I could
To where it bent
in the undergrowth;
Thinking about this poem, one of the major things it’s
talking about, is it’s a huge metaphor about the choices we make. There are many times where we have to make a
choice, but either choice is just as appealing.
When we have those moments, we sit there and just look at both paths,
and can’t decide, thinking we’ll regret it that we won’t be able to see the
other path that we could have taken. We
sit there, trying to decide how we can decide which one is the best, and so we
sit there thinking, and doing nothing.
Then took the
other, as just as fair,
And having
perhaps the better claim,
Because it was
grassy and wanted wear;
Though as for
that the passing there
Had worn them
really about the same,
As life continues on, we have to make choices, and we cannot
go back to these moments in time, and take another decision. We’ve only got this one chance to make a
decision, which can be hard, since we can only see so far, and our sight is
really limited. We can’t see around the
bend, or through the trees themselves, we can’t see what’s lurking in the
path. But, we can move based on what we
can see, and sometimes, we just need to pick a path, and move on, since either
path might be just as good as the other.
There’s not always a good or a bad path.
And both that morning equally
lay
In leaves no step
had trodden black.
Oh, I kept the
first for another day!
Yet knowing how
way leads on to way,
I doubted if I
should ever come back.
As I’ve gotten older, I’ve realized more and more about this
poem. For one thing, we all have so many
choices that we have to make, some of them are less traveled, and some are so
traveled, there’s hardly any undergrowth that can be seen, but as this poem
states, it’s not always the most traveled of paths that make it appealing. Sometimes, we need to discover, to have our
own adventures, it’s not about conforming to others, but becoming your own person,
and perhaps that’s why it’s made all the difference.
I shall be
telling this with a sigh
Somewhere ages
and ages hence:
Two roads
diverged in a wood, and I—
I took the one
less traveled by,
And that has made
all the difference.
The poem seems really simple, yet it holds many ideas behind
it. Just like how nature seems simple,
and is beautiful in its simplicity, yet in that simplicity, there is much
thought, and there is usually much more going on than what can be seen. Since, behind the two paths, there were many
who were at the same crossroads, and both had been taken, which means that
there are many stories that crossed at this same point, and came to different conclusions
based on their experiences. Although, in
this case we can’t ask others for advice since we’re alone, but when we have
our own choices, we can ask those who have followed one path or another, and we
can find out which path seems to be the better one based on the experiences of
others.
Growing up, going through school, I’ve come across many
pieces of literature, many different poems, yet this one has always stuck with
me. It’s one that I think about from
time to time, and sometimes I wonder why it has struck with me so. On the one hand, it seems simple, and like it
follows many standard things that make up a poem, for example rhyming, and the
format it’s written in. But then, I
realized that the rhyming pattern is a little bit different than most, since it
goes ABAAB, instead of ABAB, or ABBA, and has 5 lines, instead of the usual 4.
They’re slight changes to the norm, but I think that made it all the more
compelling to me, it seemed like any other poem, but then it made slight
changes to make it something different.
This poem is a classic, and shows that something seemingly
so simple, can be a masterpiece, and that poetry can draw in people from all
walks of life. It has a power that can relate
to many different people, and mean a lot of different things. It helps us to realize things about
ourselves, and about life, and it really has made all the difference, at least
for me.
I too have had a strong connection with this poem and many of the thoughts I have had about it you have put into beautiful words. I like how you paired it with your life experiences and were able to articulate your feelings about it. My only suggestion is to maybe spread the literary analysis over the entire piece instead of adding just a paragraph towards the end. With the strong imagery of the poem, maybe you could include more pictures in your post? It isn't necessary, but I think it would look cool.
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ReplyDeleteI really appreciated your paragraph length in this. You have solid ideas between the stanzas of the poem. You also did a great job balancing your personal ideas on what the poem means with your personal experiences. I also liked how it can be applied to both members of the LDS church and those outside it--you don't specify anything that would alienate either side. I think the white background works really well with the black text. I really don't have any critiques for this. It looks great!
ReplyDeleteI loved reading your post! It flowed nice and easy and the transitions between the poem and your thoughts were very smooth. I really like how you broke down each portion of the poem and made it personal to you, whether that was about your life or about your way of thinking. It made me look at the poem in a different light. I think something that could really bring out this post is to add links of your favorite artwork or interpretations of this poem. I looked myself on google and found a lot of cool pictures of what people thought the "two roads" looked like. Maybe you could add one of those to the post itself!
ReplyDeleteI'd like to see a more clever/thought out title. The current title didn't really catch my attention. The design of the blogpost was a little too simple for my taste. It seemed pretty elementary. I also think you could have included more about how the poem impacted you individually. It seemed generic and more of an analysis essay but without anything personal. If you have a story about how you actually took a road not taken that would really help strengthen your essay. Last make the visual a bit bigger, help it stand out more.
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