Monday, March 12, 2018

That has made all the difference (draft)



Sitting in English class in middle school, looking over this poem, it’s always intrigued me.  Something about it always made me want to read it over and over again.  At first glance, there’s the obvious forest imagery, that always reminds me of my times camping, my time in boy scouts, and the friends I’ve made there, or of the times I went hiking, and times I came across my own two paths in the wood.
Two roads diverged in a yellow wood,
And sorry I could not travel both
And be one traveler, long I stood
And looked down one as far as I could
To where it bent in the undergrowth;
               
Thinking about this poem, one of the major things it’s talking about, is it’s a huge metaphor about the choices we make.  There are many times where we have to make a choice, but either choice is just as appealing.  When we have those moments, we sit there and just look at both paths, and can’t decide, thinking we’ll regret it that we won’t be able to see the other path that we could have taken.  We sit there, trying to decide how we can decide which one is the best, and so we sit there thinking, and doing nothing.

Then took the other, as just as fair,
And having perhaps the better claim,
Because it was grassy and wanted wear;
Though as for that the passing there
Had worn them really about the same,

As life continues on, we have to make choices, and we cannot go back to these moments in time, and take another decision.  We’ve only got this one chance to make a decision, which can be hard, since we can only see so far, and our sight is really limited.  We can’t see around the bend, or through the trees themselves, we can’t see what’s lurking in the path.  But, we can move based on what we can see, and sometimes, we just need to pick a path, and move on, since either path might be just as good as the other.  There’s not always a good or a bad path. 
               
                                                And both that morning equally lay
In leaves no step had trodden black.
Oh, I kept the first for another day!
Yet knowing how way leads on to way,
I doubted if I should ever come back.

As I’ve gotten older, I’ve realized more and more about this poem.  For one thing, we all have so many choices that we have to make, some of them are less traveled, and some are so traveled, there’s hardly any undergrowth that can be seen, but as this poem states, it’s not always the most traveled of paths that make it appealing.  Sometimes, we need to discover, to have our own adventures, it’s not about conforming to others, but becoming your own person, and perhaps that’s why it’s made all the difference.
I shall be telling this with a sigh
Somewhere ages and ages hence:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I—
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference.

The poem seems really simple, yet it holds many ideas behind it.  Just like how nature seems simple, and is beautiful in its simplicity, yet in that simplicity, there is much thought, and there is usually much more going on than what can be seen.  Since, behind the two paths, there were many who were at the same crossroads, and both had been taken, which means that there are many stories that crossed at this same point, and came to different conclusions based on their experiences.  Although, in this case we can’t ask others for advice since we’re alone, but when we have our own choices, we can ask those who have followed one path or another, and we can find out which path seems to be the better one based on the experiences of others.

Growing up, going through school, I’ve come across many pieces of literature, many different poems, yet this one has always stuck with me.  It’s one that I think about from time to time, and sometimes I wonder why it has struck with me so.  On the one hand, it seems simple, and like it follows many standard things that make up a poem, for example rhyming, and the format it’s written in.  But then, I realized that the rhyming pattern is a little bit different than most, since it goes ABAAB, instead of ABAB, or ABBA, and has 5 lines, instead of the usual 4. They’re slight changes to the norm, but I think that made it all the more compelling to me, it seemed like any other poem, but then it made slight changes to make it something different.

This poem is a classic, and shows that something seemingly so simple, can be a masterpiece, and that poetry can draw in people from all walks of life.  It has a power that can relate to many different people, and mean a lot of different things.  It helps us to realize things about ourselves, and about life, and it really has made all the difference, at least for me.

5 comments:

  1. I too have had a strong connection with this poem and many of the thoughts I have had about it you have put into beautiful words. I like how you paired it with your life experiences and were able to articulate your feelings about it. My only suggestion is to maybe spread the literary analysis over the entire piece instead of adding just a paragraph towards the end. With the strong imagery of the poem, maybe you could include more pictures in your post? It isn't necessary, but I think it would look cool.

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  2. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yXVggKJ0gdSFQfnHNVtkgfzdGLUVqUk7b7xpc930uew/edit?usp=sharing

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  3. I really appreciated your paragraph length in this. You have solid ideas between the stanzas of the poem. You also did a great job balancing your personal ideas on what the poem means with your personal experiences. I also liked how it can be applied to both members of the LDS church and those outside it--you don't specify anything that would alienate either side. I think the white background works really well with the black text. I really don't have any critiques for this. It looks great!

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  4. I loved reading your post! It flowed nice and easy and the transitions between the poem and your thoughts were very smooth. I really like how you broke down each portion of the poem and made it personal to you, whether that was about your life or about your way of thinking. It made me look at the poem in a different light. I think something that could really bring out this post is to add links of your favorite artwork or interpretations of this poem. I looked myself on google and found a lot of cool pictures of what people thought the "two roads" looked like. Maybe you could add one of those to the post itself!

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  5. I'd like to see a more clever/thought out title. The current title didn't really catch my attention. The design of the blogpost was a little too simple for my taste. It seemed pretty elementary. I also think you could have included more about how the poem impacted you individually. It seemed generic and more of an analysis essay but without anything personal. If you have a story about how you actually took a road not taken that would really help strengthen your essay. Last make the visual a bit bigger, help it stand out more.

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